Note that a paragraph has 5 elements
Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development.
Write a paragraph wih these elements. Then comment critically on another student's paragraph. If you are first in this thread, you are in luck: you just submit your own paragraph.
As you make your own paragraph with its five elements, you might use my model to help:
This holiday season was special for various reasons. First, I learned to ...
5 elements of a paragraph are dissected.